I liked all the detail you put in the song. You definitely spend a lot more time on your songs than I do. I loved that wave splashing sound in the beginning, can you please tell me how you did it? At 1:07 when the bells came in, I did not like the hi hats you put on top of it, it was very unnecessary. The bassline you used is very common and not unique at all. I used to use it all the time actually, but now I stopped. I think this song needed a few sweep effects in some places. I thought your bass notes were too high, but if the bass instrument you used doesn't sound right on the lower notes, then it's fine.